Finished playing it and must say that I didn't expect that this visual novel will really be that harsh on depicting the domestic abuse/violence and misogynistic culture that's happening in Pakistan, it starts quite wholesome after all. Its not a bad thing, just kinda shocking. Either way, my only problem would be that the game is too short and I'm still not satisfied by the end of the story, there's still something hanging for me, but that's okay, not a big deal. Hope you guys can bring another stories of Pakistan culture to visual novel later. Good job.
Hi Terrorose. Thank you for your valuable comments. We do hope to tell more and better stories from Pakistan. Primarily this is a student game made during an internship (we should mention that in the description). I will also encourage the creator to consider a chapter two that lets players know more of what happens afterwards. Thanks for playing and commenting.
As in we will encourage the creator to consider expanding the story. Also for your reference: baba is father, beta is son, api is older sister, bhai is brother, ami / mama is mother, nahi is no, jaldi jaldi means quickly quickly, Karhai is a Meat and Tomato stew / curry, sabzi is Vegetables stew / curry. Thanks for appreciating the game and pointing the areas to improve.
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Hello, came here to say, please also add "pakistani" tag to your novel, as it is more commonly used. :D
Hi Terrorose. Thank you for your valuable comments. We do hope to tell more and better stories from Pakistan. Primarily this is a student game made during an internship (we should mention that in the description). I will also encourage the creator to consider a chapter two that lets players know more of what happens afterwards. Thanks for playing and commenting.
Chapter two? Is there a continuation of the story?
As in we will encourage the creator to consider expanding the story. Also for your reference: baba is father, beta is son, api is older sister, bhai is brother, ami / mama is mother, nahi is no, jaldi jaldi means quickly quickly, Karhai is a Meat and Tomato stew / curry, sabzi is Vegetables stew / curry. Thanks for appreciating the game and pointing the areas to improve.
Ooooh okay then, and yes, it needs to include the description of those words for non-Pakistan who plays the game.